An impressive serie of picture,been by how you have done it and how you ocupate space in each picture!if I try doing that with my copmputer,I am pretty sure I have a massive crash(I wonder sometime if the upgrade was worth it...),Well done!

I like the rework on that third frame - the ground now really looks like ground. You'd better recheck the blonde sister's right hand on the last frame, it's stuck in her head! Good riding poses.

Looks great! At the chapter of some little details to improve opened by svdl, I noticed also some poke-thru of the left leg of the right sister through her shorts in the last panel (but it could be understood as is her shorts would be torn out as is often the case with jean ones), and the unrealistic light inside the window of the barn in the first panel. Often, 3D apps don't do a perfect distribution of light in hollow areas (this is true in particular for nostrils and mouth), and this has to be darkened manually in Photoshop. Another point, the ground is far too regular and in panel 1 tiles can be seen. Poser doesn't do top-notch natural grounds although some Poser experts succeed in that field (Vue gives superior results in good hands, see jmherve's gallery), so if you don't succeed in creating a beleivable grass of gravel surface perhaps you could try to replace the ground render by a good ground custom-made photo seen from above. Okay you begin a comic project, and I'm very glad of that because no doubt that you art deserves a sequential treatment, and it's fun to do also. But perhaps you could look at what Kadaj did with his excellent Deathangel comic which is still online here in Kadaj's gallery (unfortunately he doesn't post now). Kadaj had to face a lot of problems and he fand great solutions. No doubt that it's worth a 5 my friend! Do continue this excellent work!

Great composition! Well done!!

Good done again erland

That's looking GOOD so far! Love that last frame!

Wow - you've been working hard - great job on all frames - other than what svdl and Elcet have pointed out - grass can be achieved by using a high displacement map on the ground - takes longer to render but I think it's worth it Keep up the great work

i like how you're playing with light gels. you know what i said in that thread about Geep's stuff? i think you're moving in the same direction. it's becoming harder to give you advice about what to change, because you have a recognizable style. have you every seen the work of Jack "King" Kirby? he basically set the standards for modern comics. his stuff isn't accurate realistically or toon-wise. you look at it, and you can see that he didn't worry about certain types of "quality" in favor of meeting deadlines that were insane. but he had a flair that still informs illustration. what camera angle to choose. what pose. and if someone had tried to get him to change his proportions or shapes, it probably would have killed what he did have. you've made a lot of freebies, are active on the forums, and share a lot of info. i think if you start a serial, you'll find an audience that's comfortable with your style, and looks for it in your work instead of anyone else's notion of realism. but in terms of accuracy, i can't help but say.... i love the skull, but the horns should be shaped somewhat differently if it's supposed to be a Texas longhorn: Texas longhorn on Wikimedia

Very nice, Dave! Did you model those buildings?

Porn comic! I don't think the inventors of Poser intended it to be used for something like that! :O)

This looks like the beginning of a very sexy story! More, David!

Very nicely made scenes

Hey dphoadley. I like your work! I am not a native english speaker, but the google translation seams to be very ugly. (Maybe babelfish is better?) So i try to say what i want with the words i know. I love your work at all. (remapping of older figures like Posette, and so on.). I like the most of your pictures. But i do not doubt you can fullfill the complete story at renderosity. ;) But anyway. You did a nice work with this comic. Maybe some details are may better done. You are one of the most interesting artist at this galleries. I do not know the correct english words. I will say, I am "news interested" at the forthcomming of your work. Do it again and I will enjoy it. Zitat (quote): Porn comic! I don't think the inventors of Poser intended it to be used for something like that! I think also. If they have want porn imagination, they would be do a better Genital Mapping.

And you are going to post the rest of this....where!? :)

I think the bareback sisters are going to appreciate time away from Poppa. Very cool idea, I'm all for it!!!

I'm fascinated by the house, and intrigued by the comments made by some of the others. As a non-Poser guy I can contribute pretty much "zilch," though I'm puzzled by the lesser play of texture on the close-up of the arch when compared with the more generalised scene. i like the idea of a sequenced set of pictures for Rendo and you should be able to do far more with the sets than simply concentrate on the "porno" aspects. A splendid beginning!