Broken Pedestal by heartnsoul
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Description
Finality
hits hard
when the
ground
rises up
to smack
you
in
the
face.
Making
the distance
from grace
a very
short
fall
Comments (13)
magnus073
I don't see a image my friend to go with the sad words, I hope you will repost
heartnsoul
The reason for choosing this particular genre, making the genre the abstract. Monochrome-There is a heavy fog today. As I look out my window I can only see what is immediately before me. I cannot even begin to see the horizon...what is before me is overcast. Black&White:it made me think of those moments in life where no matter how hard we try to bend and twist it, there are no shades of gray. We've all had moments like this at least once in our lives. I think it is how well we learn the lesson that is dependent on how well, how gracefully we recover. Hope all have a wonderful remainder of the week.
auntietk
Oh, WELL done! This is a wonderful bit of writing. You've told an entire story in a very few words, and those words have a physical presence ... I can feel the breath being knocked out of me. "Making the distance from grace a very short fall" ... I wish I'd written that! Elegant and evocative.
Fidelity2
Very well done. 5+.
evielouise
Ok but you scared me half to death: I read I looked and I said to myself why is my friend unhappy especially from last post lol;; It's only fog ,it will clear as all things in life do:: hugs )) Ps//dear magnus073 --wants a reload lol your tooooo much::
TallPockets
HELLO! Yes, it's a HARD fall, indeed .... But, as long as one GETS BACK UP, the HURT is MUCH less! .... My BEST to you and yours, KIND SOUL .... TallPockets.
Silkylady
This is interesting and unique Michelle. Wonderfully written. I'm really impressed. Huggs... Silkylady...
DennisReed
Striking words Michelle! As long as one is not to hard on one's self; As long as one can except that there is a lesson to be learned; As long as one has friends to listen, and a hug to give; The rise back up can go smoothly! Hugs!
davidoblad
I know life can seem bleak and dark at times Michelle. At this time my future looks very bright and I'm looking to share it with someone special. All it takes is one word.. "YES", and your life will change. My armor may need a bit of polishing but your Knight is ready when you are. Bravo on the poem and concept. Hugs and stuff from Dave :^)
jocko500
good words just get up and keep on trucking
whaleman
Sometimes the ground rises so you can see it more clearly. Grace may then be seen for what it is. You cannot fall without having first stood.
SusiQ
Stark and bleak - very well written. That is why the Lord needs us to keep humble. We cannot fall far if we are kneeling on the ground... A bit of a sidetrack - I love the shape your words formed. Tilt your head to the right and look at the sentences again - they form a shoe - the fall from the heights of a pedestal can be measured by how far you have to climb again, step by step. Make sure you are wearing comfortable shoes... :o)
beachzz
so few words so much said