wacomb tablet conclusion... short story by allisonbender
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The soldiers first Christmas...
It has been many years since Longginuse was in front of this cross, the last time he was here, he proclaimed " Surely, this was the son of GOD" He said this, after seing the way in which Jesus died years ago.
Earlier today while riding through the streets of Jerusalem, he noticed the strangest thing... the poorest of people, where giving gifts to one another and he overheard them speaking Jesus's name while doing this. Puzzelled by this he rides along deep in thought, nearing the edge of the city it begins to snow again, this too strikes him as unusual, as it's been snowing on and off, all day and he can't recall the last time he's seen snow.
As he rides through the falling snow, he notices how white and beautiful everything is, and his thoughts turn to Jesus, reigning in his horse, he stops, turning his head he looks in the direction of the cross. Speaking softly to his horse, they head in that direction.
As evening settles in and the cold falling snow hits his face, he nears the cross, stopping he dismounts and slowly aproaches the cross, standing in front of it, he experiences strange tingling sensation throughout his body and begins to quietly sob.
Dropping to his knees he begs for forgiveness.... "Longginuse" the voice in his head says, opening his eyes now, he looks up to the cross... once again he hears that gentle voice, from somewhere inside, "Longginuse I forgive you" and then, wave after wave of emotion floods over him and he cries out "My Lord and my God I surrender to you and offer all that I am to serve you" .
Kneeling there in front of the cross, he feels a peace and quietness in his soul that he's
never felt before... smiling contentedly, he
stays there, long into the night.
Sitting on the ground with his back against the cross, he heres that same quiet voice. "Longginuse long before you were born I chose you... and that day you last stood in front of me, your new journey began, and this day you are reborn, now get up and follow me, your new life has begun!"
Rising, he walks to his horse, sitting on his horse now, he turns his gaze back to the cross and then bends over and once again, whispers to his horse, slowly they walk away... he turns his head back to the cross, unable to see it now, he smiles, because he knows that he will never forget it.
With a soldiers determination he sets his eyes forward as he rides into the night, he smiles as he remembers... "Your new life has begun"....
Sorry bout the long story, my imagination has gotten the better of me.
Thank You all for indulging me
Tom
Comments (19)
CaptainNeatoman
Very cool.
Roxam
Thank you for sharing your imagination and your wonderful talent--beautiful illustration, fine command of digital color and digital tools---very talented arist, and painting with light is certainly ART!
lyron
Excellent work!!
FadeWillow
This is well im lost ofr words, its just fantastic
orig_buggy
is the round part of his sword suppose to be his heart? Buggy
allisonbender
Yes buggy very keen observation .... Thats one of the reasons I love you!!! Tom
DarkStormCrow
Excellent!
Faemike55
Very moving image and touching story! too long, nope it iwas just right!
Robert0921
The art is very well done. The story is true.:)
NetWorthy
Moving image. And most definitely DO NOT apolgize for the absolutely wonderful story. Very nicely done!
mgtcs
EXCELLENT!
ARTWITHIN
Magnificent painting, Tom. The story sounds similar to someone else I know. The authenticity is in your story. Beautiful!
joaq
Outstanding piece of ArtPainting!!!
bazza
Nice work.. lovely story..well done..5++++
bmac62
Two things. Your witness is true and your digital results have a quality I didn't know was possible. Thanks for posting!
VRG
A story told, in words and art, as one who knows! Thank you, it is very encouraging.
vintorix
I am only interested in one thing, "How many years does it take to learn to paint like that?" ? Grr
debbielove
Outstanding work! Feel free to let your imagination 'run away'! It is quite stunning. Really excellent work ALL round. Rob.
DIANE603
"Praise the Lord" and your artwork!!