Party Crashers by beachzz
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The morning started out with one of those pity parties. I wrote a friend, thanking him for some kind words, that he jolted me right out of that mood. And then this came to me:
Party Crashers
These uninvited guests
Crashed my psychic house
They’re trashing the place
Making a mess of my mind
Get out you ugly people
Leave this place at once
Go home to your own hell
And live your miserable lives
Go back to those
Dark dank deep ugly caves
Where the light never shines
Wallow in your own despair
So get out go home
I have better things to do
I’m not gonna let you
Ruin my life take my soul
For I have a sunnier place
To live in this world
One of light and hope
Laughter and love
Leave me in peace
7/17/09
Comments (16)
PD154
WOW! a rant and so niceley done too, I promise I wont do it again LOL!
durleybeachbum
Where did THAT come from?! Brill! We don't need toxic people round us!
Meisiekind
WOW!!!!!! Incredible Marilyn and words that I so completely understand!!! Amazing writing and clearing of the soul!!! :)
THROBBE
Very nice work!
bmac62
MARILYN! All you have to do to get rid of these people is turn the TV news off! LOL. However, since I can't really do much to influence world events these days, I have switched entirely to music, the weather and Netflix. :-)))
thevolunteer
Marilyn, I do believe this is one of your best yet. And the picture is perfect for it. We don't need toxic people invading our lives or thoughts. Bravo girl....Aloha
auntietk
Yikes! Whatever happened, it sure produced some excellent writing from you! This is fantastic. I can't wait to hear the rest of the story!
photostar
There's an older song, way back when that starts out something like, "...I'm gonna wash that man right outta my hair." I think you've said it best in your narrative. WTG.
goodoleboy
You go, girl! Great catharsis! I know just how you feel about these disrepectful, foul mouthed, rowdy, spoiled teenagers nowadays. Ozzie and Harriet never raised kids like those!
Chipka
Oh this is fantastic! I love the emotional intensity of it and the sheer moxy that is often required to tell "folks" like that to simply beat it. I love this. Cathartic works are always so moving and empowering. Ugh...did I just use the Oprah-word "empower"? Oh well...that doesn't take away from the great intensity of this.
bazza
Lovely writing.. heart felt.. well done..Nice image too!!
JenX
I love the emotional picture this paints. I also want to frame this and hang this outside my room...Too many people around me right now for my comfort!
3x3
lovely written x
hipps13
I agree wonderful work warm hugs, Linda
vaggabondd
Very nice work my friend, sometimes it is awful hard to chase them away
anahata.c
oh yeah, I know those visitors. We used to call them "the ghosts in the closet"—they love to come out when you've come back from a wonderful day and douse the whole place in darkness. And then again, I think the muses send them to f___ with us when we're on a high. Perfectly written, you captured all their obnoxious flavor & the feeling we have when they're waiting for us at the door at night. And your image, though in darkness, really does feel like two birds singing in the night, so maybe it's hope in the darkness, like the last stanza & final line of your poem. I hear ya, I know what you're talking about...(Lol, tara, wanting to know the rest of the story. By now I assume you guys talked about it.) Fine portrait of those blasted buggers.