Haiku Goodbye by beachzz
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Haiku Goodbye
Time to say goodbye
It's all over now baby
Blue it was real fun
Comments (15)
bazza
Beautiful writing and car.. well done!!
durleybeachbum
MMMmm! Excellent haiku.
ZanderXL
Excellent work.
lizzibell
Beautiful...
chasfh
lovely work...
THROBBE
Nice work!
flavia49
very beautiful!!
awjay
superb
auntietk
I love the way "baby blue" breaks, and the image you've chosen is perfect!
3x3
lovely haiku and image x
hipps13
beautful blue and words warm hugs, Linda
Meisiekind
Bravo Marilyn! Wonderful words and image! :)
goodoleboy
So long, goodbye, it's been stimulating to know you.... Fine prose along with the pic of the old vehicle, say about circa 1935?
Chipka
The thing that struck me first, about this, is the way it adheres to perfect haiku form, right down to the idiosyncrasy of breaking a familiar group of syllables (usually forming a word) into something unexpected. "Baby blue" is so familiar a thing, but then, when broken, you allow an excellent pause in logic and "thought" that allows all sorts of emotions to rush in. I love this! You're one heck of a haiku-poet, and well...that's one more thing for me to savor and appreciate! Great work, as always! I love the image too, it's perfect!
anahata.c
well tara & chip said it all so...BYE!!!!!! (lol) They did though, and that break of 'baby blue' was the real nexus of the piece. It's a great photo btw, and it's a fitting way to leave a glowing image of the past. Dazzled, I leave now. Blue in my eyes, it floods. Past Memories, new lights...