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Look Down The Road

Writers Challenge posted on Jan 03, 2010
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I am a warrior Who is so tired of the fight Every single day Is a battle
   .....vaggabondd I was going to post another image from my visit to the Museum of Glass tonight. Then I read Randy's (vaggabondd) latest post 'Battles In My Mind'. This came to me after five minutes. The devil rarely kills you all at once. After all, where's the sport in that? No, most times you die the death of a thousand cuts. Little by little it is taken from you until, in the end, you pray for death. But sometimes the devil fails. Sometimes you are just too stubborn. Why should I give anyone the satisfaction of leaving? Besides, this world is so screwed up I have to stick around to see what happens next. When you are tired of the journey, look down the road. What is beyond the next turn? Always something new. Go and find it.

Comments (16)


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myrrhluz

2:42AM | Sun, 03 January 2010

A good poem for many of us. I will keep the last stanza in mind. Thank you.

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durleybeachbum

4:10AM | Sun, 03 January 2010

Excellent.

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flavia49

7:51AM | Sun, 03 January 2010

wonderful!

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elfin14doaks

9:20AM | Sun, 03 January 2010

Awesome and very moving.

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JuliSonne

10:17AM | Sun, 03 January 2010

Word and picture = identically! Optimism - pleases me very well. The admission is beautiful!

lucindawind

11:00AM | Sun, 03 January 2010

beautiful shot !

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Faemike55

11:36AM | Sun, 03 January 2010

wonderful response! very positive outlook! great photo

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sandra46

4:23PM | Sun, 03 January 2010

superb poem, and great photo commentary

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psyoshida

10:00PM | Sun, 03 January 2010

Very sage advice and wonderful attitude. I also love the picture, it fits perfectly.

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tennesseecowgirl

11:00PM | Sun, 03 January 2010

Wonderful work and message !

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hipps13

4:13PM | Mon, 04 January 2010

might find something else when a travels down them winding roads awesome capture warm hugs, Linda

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Hubba1

8:13AM | Tue, 05 January 2010

Awesome job :)

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danapommet

10:20PM | Tue, 05 January 2010

Love the poem. The lonely road looks like a road I drove in the Canadian Rockies. Dana

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beachzz

2:31AM | Thu, 07 January 2010

The road beckons and gives us hope--well said!! The devil doesn't always win!!

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mariogiannecchini

10:23AM | Tue, 22 June 2010

Very beautiful photo ! Good poem !

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anahata.c

1:11PM | Fri, 03 February 2017

I didn't know you wrote poetry...a succinct truthful poem, told in your usual relaxed voice, with a twist of sly humor and of course truth. vaggabondd's poem (a haiku?) has a tragic feel to it. Maybe after battling war, the battles of every day and age, loss and memory finally fells a warrior. Your poem speaks of death by a thousand cuts rather than by a big event, and of saying "screw it" to the cuts, and going on. And your life of travel, adventure and peering into the inner heart of everywhere you go and of all you meet, backs up your last stanza. Not many of us can claim that. Another succinct yet wholly conversational, relaxed and sharp piece from you---with, as Kissinger or Mao said, "the added benefit that it's also true." (Man, I just quoted two of the most f---d up people in history, in your gallery! What'm I, nuts? Just take the words, and forget the sources! I don't think you want your wisdom equated with major war criminals.) (Take heart that I didn't quote them well...)


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