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Did You See Me by vaggabondd

Writers • Realism • posted on Feb 16, 2010
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I saw you last night In a crowed room Sitting all alone Trying not to make eye contact Without looking like you are avoiding it A tiny little mouse In a world full of cats Afraid of both life and death Because you have been somewhere in between For so vary long Cursing yourself for being there Counting the minutes Until you can leave And still be able to tell the people you know I was there Did you see me I had a friend ask me one time if I thought I had esp I told her no I just know things about people hahaha. I maybe way off but sometimes when I walk by and see people I get a weird feeling from them and this is the feeling I got when I saw this lady last night sitting on a bench all alone.

Comments (14)

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Faemike55

2:41PM | Tue, 16 February 2010

Great writing.

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brycek

2:45PM | Tue, 16 February 2010

Wonderful writing Randy!!

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drifterlee

3:05PM | Tue, 16 February 2010

I have felt like that. Maybe you saw me?

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wysiwig

11:18PM | Tue, 16 February 2010

This hits home. Great work.

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myrrhluz

1:09AM | Wed, 17 February 2010

It hits home for me too. This is a good reason to always have a book. It helps insulate one from those eyes. Excellent poem.

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dakotabluemoon

6:32AM | Wed, 17 February 2010

Very cool stuff and i do believe there is a little esp in all of us and i do know that women especially have this.

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Primal

7:48AM | Wed, 17 February 2010

Always look forward to your poetry and insight..Very well written..

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Rainastorm

8:51AM | Wed, 17 February 2010

I've had the same thing asked of me....sometimes, you just know.

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adrie

11:42AM | Wed, 17 February 2010

I always love your poems Randy, hugs Adrie.

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Merrylee

12:16PM | Wed, 17 February 2010

I can say I know...I just imagine...nice poem

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hipps13

6:21PM | Wed, 17 February 2010

wonderful work smiles warm hugs, Linda

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miashadows

9:05AM | Fri, 19 February 2010

Wonderful poem !

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kasalin

1:52PM | Sat, 20 February 2010

Nice poem, dear Randy !!! 5* Hugs Karin :)

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Lisajobb

4:36PM | Sat, 20 February 2010

I think you are an incredibly perseptive and tuned in person. I can tell this by your poetry.

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