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Eye To Eye

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I woke up this morning and for some reason could not stop thinking about this story. I thought I’d post it so you could tell me what you think. __________________________________________________ A young man, born and raised in a small town, decided to leave his home and seek his fortune. He found a job in a big city and moved into an apartment in a large building. It was a cozy place with a balcony that gave him a view of the city. One evening he was standing on the balcony and looking up at a cloudy sky. As he stretched out his arm to see if it was raining a glass eye fell into his hand. He looked up to see a pretty young women looking down from the balcony above. “Is this your eye?” he asked. “Yes.” said the woman. “I’ll bring it up to you,” the young man replied. He ran up the stairs and knocked on her door. She was even more beautiful in person. She thanked him and explained that she had lost her eye in a childhood accident and sometimes had trouble with the glass one. “Would you like to come in for a drink?” she asked. The young man didn’t really know anyone in the city and gladly accepted the invitation. They spent an hour in pleasant conversation over drinks. As he got up to go she said she had something cooking in the oven and would he like to stay for dinner. Again he gladly agreed. They spent the next several hours getting to know one another. She had been born and raised in the city and would be happy to show him around. He quickly grew to like her and could see she liked him as well. He helped her clean up and, as he prepared to leave, she shyly asked if he would like to stay the night. He was pleased and flattered but had just one question. “Do you do this with every man you meet?” he asked. She smiled and said, “No.” “Only those who catch my eye.” Wishing all of you glad tidings and a joyous holiday

Comments (13)


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Faemike55

1:12AM | Sat, 25 December 2010

I'm not sure whether I should groan at the word play, or laugh or both Very good Mark, you suckered me in with this one Merry Christmas to you and your family

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Tea_Rex

1:23AM | Sat, 25 December 2010

:-D Yeah, that's a great smile lifted up on my weary face .. one I will take with me happily as I tumble into bed. I had this sense you were taking us down a Rod Serling back alley and did not see the sweet twist which actually lay in wait. Nicely turned. Merry Christmas, Brother! I wish you what you most wish for yourself. & May these days bring you light and happiness. With warmth and friendship, Terry

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Flixthe

3:23AM | Sat, 25 December 2010

Funny joke. This wouldn't be easily translated in French, as our phrase is "HIT the eye". Joyeux Noël.

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durleybeachbum

5:36AM | Sat, 25 December 2010

Brilliant!! Thankyou for your perpetual sense of fun, Mark, and your great comments!

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flavia49

7:37AM | Sat, 25 December 2010

LOL!! fabulous tale! Happy Holidays!!!

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auntietk

1:02PM | Sat, 25 December 2010

LOL! A groaner punch line, but I TOTALLY didn't see it coming! :D Even the way the story was displayed on my screen added to the surprise. I had to scroll down a little for the last lines. Glad you decided to share this!

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mariogiannecchini

1:29PM | Sat, 25 December 2010

Very nice story, Mark! Merry Christmas to you and your family !

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sandra46

5:09PM | Sat, 25 December 2010

TERRIFIC STORY, I'M STILL SMILING! EXCELLENT!

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tennesseecowgirl

8:42PM | Sat, 25 December 2010

Did you write this story?? either way I love it, very touching and funny. I sure hope you had or are still having a Merry Christmas and surrounded by loved ones. Have a very Merry Christmas christmascows.jpg

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JuliSonne

3:06AM | Sun, 26 December 2010

Beautiful story. Hopefully it so often does NOT throw the eye!!

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psyoshida

10:08PM | Mon, 27 December 2010

LOL, you totally tricked me on this one. Clever and beautifully written. I'm still laughing. Excellent. More please.

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vaggabondd

4:50AM | Tue, 28 December 2010

haha, she is a eye catcher, I have heard of those haha

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hipps13

11:56PM | Sat, 08 January 2011

Sure had me going as stunned came along wonderful work, Mark warm hugs, Linda


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