Kyna Page 024 - Bait by LyleAryn
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Page 024, and done a couple days early! I've got a ton of stuff to learn for the next few pages, so I wanted to finish this one earlier. I'm also going to be really cracking on my book this weekend in an mad-dash attempt to get caught up on the writing challenge. So, best to get it out of the way!
Don't worry though. I'll still be rendering about every day. Once I get done writing today, I'll be doing another pinup. (Apart from the one I'm about to post.)
I wanted to thank everybody that's been reading along. I really appreciate it!
Time for the plan to be set in motion! Today I also put all the page numbers to rights, and fixed a couple pages with incorrect text. Should be all copacetic now. I might end up redoing this one, and I think I might need to outline the two smaller panels with a black line on the outside of the white line. It's a small change, but I think that will make it better. Saw this sort of layout in another comic and wanted to give it a try. As for the sizes of the boxes, I attempted to follow the Golden Ratio. Not sure if I was successful.
Comments (13)
Tracesl
excellent
LyleAryn
Thank you, Tracesl
RodS
Great page - looks like things are about to get intense!
"A ton of stuff to learn for the next pages..." God, does that sound familiar.... If I had a dollar for every time I've asked myself, "OK.... How the hell am I gonna do this...?" 😉 That's what keeps it new and interesting, though..
LyleAryn
Indeed! Keeps it very interesting!
starship64 Online Now!
Fantastic work!
LyleAryn
Thank you! The adventure continues!
chasfh
Super work as usual!
Carry on!
LyleAryn
Yes... This next bit is going to have me up at late hours for the the foreseeable future. But it will be worth! About time I learned opacity maps anyway!
Kordouane
It is superb, it must be difficult to do this kind of work, I admire !!
LyleAryn
Thank you. It certainly takes some time, and sometimes I struggle to "see" all thr connecting pieces. But it has been rewarding.
Koala44
Splendid work, bravo
LyleAryn
Thank you! So glad you visited!
STEVIEUKWONDER
Like the finish here. It's really interesting to look at how it has turned out!
LyleAryn
So much finangling to get it right! But, it pays off.
Thank you for looking, and your kind words.
Saby55
Simply fantastic! No more words, great story 👍🙋♂️
LyleAryn
Thanks! Hopefully it keeps reader's interests.
Radar_rad-dude
Very interesting. Nice job! Bravo.
LyleAryn
Thanks!
miwi
I enjoy your art for the series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LyleAryn
Thanks Mike!
ikke.evc
Excellent!
LyleAryn
Thank you very much!
daggerwilldo
A most fun story. Very creative writing and graphics content. A fine job.
LyleAryn
Thank you! I'm looking forward to the next few pages, but it might be a week or two before I get to them.
dakotajaroo
the story continue , nice scene
LyleAryn
Thank you. Should be all set up for the action now. I think I'll have ONE more easy panel - the guard shouting "GET HER!" and then I'll be losing sleep over posing and creating good effects. Kyna's got a fight ahead of her!