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Comments (10)
marini
At the end you published the dialogue ... you're really too kind! The story is very gripping and I love your images: the mid-shot scenes with all the details all the way down the hall and the customers chatting in the waiting room… and the fantastic last scene where you can feel the feverish work of the employees and those fantastic reflections on the glasses ... they drive me crazy with pleasure (and even a little envy). But my favorite image is the penultimate where Patricia's expression is so well done that it almost seems to hear her thoughts aloud. You are very talented Molly!!
MollyFootman
Thank you for such a lovely comment! It certainly makes the extra work of putting the dialog text in for ease of translation seem worth it to me. <3
As for all the detail, I think it really adds to a story but I admit it slows me down and is a lot of work. That you appreciate it so is really fuel for my creative engine. Thanks!
Finally, Pixie's expression as she pines for Lena took me a lot of time and I'm still not quite completely satisfied with it. That it struck you so really warms my heart. Although the story is mainly about Lena, Patricia "Pixie" Dust is a favorite character in it!
Molly
Radar_rad-dude
Another fine chapter, Molly! You have been doing your research? Great dialogue and illustrations! Many fine kudos from me!
MollyFootman
Thank you so much, my dear. I am always doing research.... ;-)
Molly
bakapo
Good dialog setup, poses, clothing, and small prop details. Excellent work all around, seriously, Molly, bravo!
MollyFootman
Thank you for such a supportive and encouraging comment, my dear! It's a ton of work, even with the very fine content provided by TruForm and santuziy78. <3
Molly
LuxAeterna
Yeah!!
MollyFootman
Thanks! =)
Molly
jdwtrxk
Really good stuff - the idea of putting this story into panels was exactly what it needed to up the pace further, and setting the dialogue to straight prose was an added bonus - though I always put these on the big screen to spy on details....
MollyFootman
Thanks, JD. The graphic novel format provides a rich visual language and method of story-telling that far exceeds what is available in single images with accompanying descriptions and dialog. Unfortunately, it's also MUCH more work! [>.<] That being said, I'll likely keep it up as I agree that it moves the story along at a more enjoyable pace. I'm delighted that you look for the details and that's why I provide the separate images as well as the page. =)
Molly
eekdog
lots of words and balloons, took me a bit, somewhat crowded. but enjoyed this.
MollyFootman
Indeed you have identified the downside to this format for story-telling! Thanks for sticking with it, I appreciate it. <3
Molly
ROGERGONDRAN
Quel travail impressionnant, c'est super d'avoir publié les dialogues pour une histoire complexe et des images absolument convaincantes.
MollyFootman
Je suis heureux que la boîte de dialogue disponible pour une traduction facile ait augmenté votre plaisir de la page. Cette forme de narration peut être très difficile et j'espère que vous continuerez à suivre l'histoire et à l'apprécier!
Molly
UteBigSmile
OMG Molly, what an outstanding work you created here!!!!
MollyFootman
Thank you, Ute! I'm still unsure about the format as it gets a bit busy with all the dialog balloons. I really appreciate the encouraging comment. <3
Molly
MajinBoo
I'm impressed there's a lot of text but yet your placement of the characters, speech and thought balloons doesn't take away from the art at all. Love the look of the main characters. They have stylized look yet not unrealistic. Might take a page out of your book and start adding all my separate images I use for pages and same time I post the finished page.
MollyFootman
Thank you, Randy. The way you are allowed to post multiple images in a single posting page here seems ideal for this method of artistic story-telling. Graphic novel style pages are quite challenging but a rich narrative method utilizing test and may visual cues. I'm still learning and have actually studied some texts on the matter. =)
Molly
mifdesign
Captivating composition, great poses and expressions, brilliant render. Exquisite Artwork. I love it!
MollyFootman
Thanks, Marius. I'm glad you are enjoying this enough to leave me a nice comment! =)
Molly