My Heart by naria
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Description
When I think of you
I soar
With wide spread wings
For I know what I feel
Is deep and true
And you do not see
As I write this too
Warm tears fall
My wings are clipped
I crash
Break in two
All for you
My blood a blaze
I yearn for you near
To feel your caress
Looking deep in your eyes
Your soul touching mine
Will it ever be?
Will you love me too?
You
Comments (5)
DeadbutDreaming
probably he/she will reject as usual well all the time this happens tome hehe you can learn to say Let me hate As black prevails As blood invades As love congeals Let me hate (these words are not mine but it fits).
Elfenone
This is beautiful..it plays with rhyme and skips it..but still holds rythmn, and the words are very lovely.
tjames
On l14 Shouldn't it be "I yearn for you near?" I kuje the poem short and sweet with a great economy of words it suggests a picture and that's what good poetry is all about.
Jalen
again very vivid gf..Jalen
fantasy2
Pretty! Loved the rhythm! fantastic! kisses