Dragon Sonnet by naria
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Description
(Just something fun...)
From the sages of old
He is a mystical creature
Or so I've been told
With a fiery breath as a feature
He is often seen in the night
Destroying villages and towns
Until the break of light
While being chased by knights renown
Slayers from across the land
Will come for his talons, teeth, and scales
The sages have seen first-hand
In hopes of making impenetrable mail
This story has been told by the sages
And passed down for ages and ages
Comments (3)
tjames
A good start. I can't really see the seperation in your complaint and answer portions and your ending strays from a final couplet to a tercet because of the "a" in "mail". I like the poem but I'm a littlr pressed at calling it a sonnet. It's more like a fourteen line lyric or a short ode. Take heart.
Elfenone
I agree that this can't exactly be called a sonnet but it does sing.. like a song.. keep going. You've got something wonderful going. Sonnets are difficult to write..your efforts are to be commended.
Jalen
im not a poetry critic..poetry i s elf expression..u did that gf..Jalen