The House of Souls by Blush

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Mar 31, 2004

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Smoky hued doors opened Almost ethereal Corridors and patterns Weaved Right and left~ First there was The Crying Room many tears The Crying Room had heard~ The Living Room was next Irridescent roses glowed and shimmered through lacy curtains and pale moonlight~ Next was the room Forgiveness and Sorrow I shuddered to see their faces The ones I had wronged in this life~ Upstairs Was the Thank You room happiness filled my heart soft light such a peaceful room~ Then came The Dark Room for the things I had done in my life that were inexcuseable sinful~ And now that I have viewed these rooms I feel inedaquate and I hope for A more pleasant journey the next time I visit The House of Souls~

Comments (22)

vjerana

4:58PM | Wed, 31 March 2004

I wish to know what "House of souls" is about...Is it possible to go there in the meditation? I think - yes! Very nice poem, my dear! Excellent!!!

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DennisReed

11:11PM | Wed, 31 March 2004

I think I'll book my permanent stay in the Thank You Room - Thank You :)! A most pleasant reading journey this time! Bravo!

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qmont

4:09AM | Thu, 01 April 2004

Susan, I think we all pass through many rooms, in our lives journey, hopefuly our stay in the darker rooms will be breif.....anyway your writing has again opened my eyes this morning, and gave me something to chew on today. You ability to write is truly of the finest quality, thanks for the words my friend...............John

wildfire2003

6:42AM | Thu, 01 April 2004

Very beautiful work. The "rooms" are just what we all need to visit to give us perspective and to help us grow and better ourselves. Wonderful and touching symbolism Susan, a heartfelt poem. Thank you!

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ObsidianLogic

9:00AM | Thu, 01 April 2004

wow so in depth so wonderful so needed THANK YOU

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highcrow

3:53PM | Thu, 01 April 2004

This is truly beautiful Susan.It evokes so much feeling about the inner journey we must experience in life.You have a wonderful gift my dear.The pen is mightier than the sword and you touch many people with your words.Beautiful! V

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Syncopate

9:36AM | Fri, 02 April 2004

Excellent writing, and all true. We experience this in life, especially toward the end. Hopefully, there will at least be a balance. Thanks for sharing..

pscott

7:23PM | Fri, 02 April 2004

Beautiful poetry ... smooth and captivating. You have said much in few words and I hear a voice that flows. It was a wonderful read.

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romanceworks

1:33PM | Sat, 03 April 2004

Wowl Susan, your haunting poem gave me chills.What a special way you hve communicated, for we all have these rooms within us. Beautiful work. and a Vote. :o) CC a

roadrunner69

11:38PM | Sat, 03 April 2004

How about a 'writing room'? .... where someone can learn to write as well as you have just done! .... EXCELLENT!

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SNAKEY

1:08PM | Mon, 05 April 2004

Very simple words and very effective. you are soul stirer......;)

Jalen

1:50PM | Tue, 11 May 2004

wow I just cant help but feel so inadequate and not sur I should even call myself a poet...maybe just a writer with a message....your innate ability to instantly draw your readers into your vision..excellent Susan..Laura:0))))))

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meico

8:51AM | Sat, 15 May 2004

An original approach to the facets of our individuality - what makes us who we are. I felt obliged to examine my own soul architecture after reading this ... which says much more directly how well the poem worked.

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SherriEmily

9:39AM | Wed, 19 May 2004

It's very hard for some to read between the lines of this poem, but the one's that can, it touches the soul, and has touched mine.

sheilakalajdzic

9:44AM | Fri, 18 June 2004

a poem which makes us face our own demons and choices we've made. this one makes us look in the mirror and see some bitter (and some not-so-bitter) truths! This poem is very powerful!

stevermstrong

5:52AM | Thu, 22 July 2004

Wonderful and touching Susan. Your talent is obvious...Thanks for sharing.

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wizardofnoz

11:00AM | Wed, 04 August 2004

I came here b'coz of a flower for u by sheilakalajdzic. And after reading ur poem I have no regrets. Wonderful, deep and moving.

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GOLDILOCKSUK

6:32AM | Wed, 08 September 2004

Oh what a deep and moving poem I like it very much. You are very talented and have a wonderful gift to put your thoughts into words the way you do Hugs Cathy xooxox

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