Blinded by BlueLotus7

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Aug 01, 2004

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Perfect Beauty Who can find it? Does it really exist? In a man-made world It's a rainbow chase A fool's folly In our search For the perfect partner The perfect form We lose sight of Our perfect Love Hidden in imperfection We perceive Our heart's desire Giving it mental form Only to discover Our perfect partner Is right before us But who can see when blinded by Perfection?

Comments (12)

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Metonicus

8:43AM | Sun, 01 August 2004

Thought provocing.

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Avalonne

9:06AM | Sun, 01 August 2004

I think perhaps truer words were never written...

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katili

11:34AM | Sun, 01 August 2004

You said it, this is so true and your poem is so fine.

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PandyGirl

11:36AM | Sun, 01 August 2004

i love it.. what a wonderful poem hun!! keep it up!!

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SK2Design

1:31PM | Sun, 01 August 2004

Captivating! You've done an awesome job of saying exactly what so many of us miss during out 'search'; the perfect person standing right before our eyes. We truly can be such blind creatures and you've so successfully captured that in your poem. Awesome!

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meico

3:08PM | Sun, 01 August 2004

A complex, yet compelling, analysis of the perennial search for the ultimate soul-mate. The short [but succinct] stanzas ensure that unwanted sentimentality doesn't creep in .. for which you must be congratulated. An excellent read! v

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