Quest by cagewench

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Nov 22, 2004

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Feeling very out-of-sorts today and, because the eyes are the window to the soul, I used another pic of one of my eyes... I would have taken a new one but the batteries in my camera are dead... __________________________________________________________________________ Quest
Questioning by thoughts words and deeds
Searching with heart mind and soul
Feeling with spirit shaking hands and dulling eyes
Not certain what I seek in this quest of understanding
Is it the past - patchworked and scattered?
Is it the present - painful and confusing?
Is it the future - uncertain and opaque?
I inhale the smoke and sweat out my fears moving to music that only I hear
Drums beat in endless rythmn with my healing heart My shadow is absorbed into the dark
Clothes suffocate me confine me define me I must be free
Nakedness of body and soul connectedness to all
Fleeting memories of birth pain confusion fear meld with all that I still feel here
I question myself and my life I search for my place on my Path because I feel lost I feel that I am failing at being myself
Let the music guide me let the universe fill me let love cleanse me so I can recognize this face

Comments (12)

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experimental

12:49PM | Mon, 22 November 2004

Keep on dancing to that music that only you hear, it's what makes us original. Beautiful words.

xxxander

4:48PM | Mon, 22 November 2004

Beautiful words...I FELT this one so much...and I can relate to it...simply amazing poem!

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TallPockets

5:37PM | Mon, 22 November 2004

Superb work. Vote. Your pic above and your reference to music got me to humming ''Brown-eyed-girl' by Van Morrison. A good friend of mine once told me, "Stop ''thinking'' so damned much and just 'feel' and 'be' a human being???

Jianna

6:06PM | Mon, 22 November 2004

Very beautifully written, and something I can relate to so much. There have been so many times in my life that I wondered if I was on the right path, and just exactly what my path was, and where it was leading. But like you, I just keep on marching to the drums in my head that only I can hear. Excellent job! HUGS ~Heather~

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classyladytwo

11:27PM | Mon, 22 November 2004

wow powerful and beautiful all in one wonderful writting *V

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Diago

11:57PM | Mon, 22 November 2004

One word. Thank you.

Lissa_lei

1:04AM | Tue, 23 November 2004

Yes for me too, Thank you. Eccellent and emotional. Lina

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cagewench

8:50AM | Tue, 23 November 2004

thank you all

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Shabetei

6:36AM | Wed, 24 November 2004

Very nicely written I like the pace and movement of it. I agree the eyes are the window to the soul. Always keep the window open for you never know what the wind will blow in ;o)

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