cacophony by cagewench

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Dec 10, 2004

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Description

Just wrote this one and used a self-portrait which I attempted to make the mirror dark without just using black to cover it... but you can see the jagged edges because I have poor mouse control *sigh*
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cacophony
Looking in the mirror expecting to see a visage of muted agony instead there is nothing - it is opaque its surface cool and smooth it stays as dark as onyx
Life tastes of bitter liquorice and leaves its sticky stain upon a wandering, tattered soul suffused with pain
Shrieking and writhing as talon-like fingers reach into the meat peeling back the layers violating the sacred silence by perpetuating lies and violence
Choked by grief drowning in rage raped and bloodied thrown in a cage
Divest of emotions essence and flesh there is nothing left to lay to rest

Comments (23)

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Shadowmonkey

2:01PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

Very descriptive.

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eternalwytch1

2:03PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

Powerful and painful. HUGZ

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cagewench

2:04PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

hugz back thanks... I figure if I keep writing it all out, that it'll be like piercing a boil so I don't hold all this negativity within me

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cagewench

2:15PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

raw is a good word for it...

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NothingNess

2:29PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

Very powerful and raw with emotion. Thank you for sharing.

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cagewench

2:34PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

hey, you re-posted your comment :) now my comment is out of place...

SJConnick

2:37PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

I hate to repeatly use the same word to describe your work, especially since it doesn't even do it justice. Your work is so raw it stings. Brilliantly composed. Thank you once again.

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cagewench

3:00PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

thank you :) And I was glad to see you post something new :)

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meico

3:44PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

There is power here, certainly, and pain, of course - but also I detect [perhaps wrongly] a sense of underlying innocence defiled.

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cagewench

6:09PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

I find when I'm already emotionally vulnerable that some of the nasty stuff from my past that still lurks seeps out a bit too...

iamkate101

8:33PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

I do agree with how raw the emotion is, and I do hope that you find release in it!

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MOOOW

9:25PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

You are wonderful artist my friend!!with many new ideas ,best wishes!!

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cagewench

9:38PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

thank you

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TallPockets

9:49PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

Powerful, descriptive writing. V (as for poor mouse control, my mouse is just fine - it's my hand-eye-brain stem coordination that's off - for all of my '53' years' - WINK). Now, go make an old geezer happy for just one day and write him a funnneeeee piece.

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cagewench

10:00PM | Fri, 10 December 2004

Are you saying you don't think "Body Art" was funny? pout c'mon now... I did my once-in-a-blue-moon-Cara-remembers-she-has-a-sense-of-humour one and that was it ;)

gknapp

11:11AM | Sat, 11 December 2004

Intense!!

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cagewench

11:36AM | Sat, 11 December 2004

So is the one I just posted...

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IgnisSerpentus

11:40AM | Sat, 11 December 2004

This is an awesome poem... its very much akin to my style (well what it used to be when I still wrote) and lol about the mirror... u know, I would havent even noticed, if u hadnt said - I colored the mirror in. I think u did an excellent job with ur mouse control.

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cagewench

11:47AM | Sat, 11 December 2004

thanks :) Seriously though, I had to say it ebcause I wouldn't want someone looking and saying, "God, Cara-Mae really screwed that up... and yet she still posted it" - I'd rather have them know that I know I'm not good at that sort of thing, but still made an attempt.

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