It's all in the smile by cagewench

Writers • Romance • posted on Jan 04, 2005

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So I'm awake, and alone

And, I'm a lousy actress because I had the poem written over an hour ago, but I've had issues trying to get a semi-decent smile... so I settled on this one, flipped to greyscale and haphazardly colourized my lips with my crappy mouse and the freehand selection tool, so you'll see it's a bit off... but I hope you at least enjoy the poem :)

It's all in the smile
persistent I hear the distant thumping and catch my breath in anticipation my chest rises and falls rhythmically a flush covers my skin my eyelids flutter everything grows louder my heart beating my pulse thrumming skin drawn taunt with wanting mouth smiling unwholesomely embracing the sense of wickedness as desire pools so many fluids until that final plunge... relief, release, relax hunger fulfilled entering a languid state breathing calms heartbeat slows and now the smile is one of satisfaction

Comments (19)

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eternalwytch1

4:13AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

Great poem, sounds like Jay missed out. :-)

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nocturnecsh

5:39AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

I love the style of this one. You say so much with so little: "Until that final plunge..." - talk about your word pictures! Yep, Jay really missed out!

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meico

8:42AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

Terrific rhythm ... the poem's good too! Well at least we didn't miss out entirely.

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cagewench

9:25AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

thanks all :)

netsia

10:20AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

that's why people have affairs ;) good poem

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cagewench

10:24AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

not I... I am a faithful wench :):):)

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DirtyFairy

10:33AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

hmm love that one....great flow! to bad he slept through it ;)

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cagewench

10:39AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

hahahhahahahhahaha tis true!

SJConnick

12:36PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

gawd I've missed reading your work. risking soundy creepy...lol..your work makes me feel as if i am there, like watching a movie.

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cagewench

12:38PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

Not creepy at all, I take it as a huge compliment :) hug

ann0314

9:46PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

I really just love the emotoin of your words boy do I wish I remembered how to write LOL....and I love the images you ut with them...so are you making a book of these? Cuz you should IMHO :O) AWESOME JOB and flow!!!! VOTE

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cagewench

10:07PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

awww thanks ann :)

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