'Til Death Do Us Part by eternalwytch1
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'Til Death Do Us Part
Comments (11)
meico
Shivers up the spine time ... and how I loved it! A great little story, beautifully told!
cagewench
eeewwwwwwwww, this gave my nasty visuals! Great writing, but my poor, poor tummy is turning now :(
netsia
I love this, another Rod Serling/Steven King moment[hope it wasn't his mother]....the macabre always interests me. Interesting thing is that this HAS happened somewhere on this planet. V
NothingNess
Ah nice twist at the end there and I almost expected it ...but not to that degree. Initially I thought she was an invalid and he was going to kill her because he couldn't take care of her anymore. Oh my you should of heard the gasp come out of my mouth when I read the ending. Oh I love a good love story turned scary horror story.
eternalwytch1
Giggles I loved writing this one, since no one expects horror from me. :-)
SJConnick
very interesting, not what i was expecting at all. at first i'd thought maybe it was a "family" thing of sorts (as i had seen "Jack was just helping her into the car when the police came..." when i was scanning the length of the piece) Glad it took a different twist. well done.
eternalwytch1
Thank you. :-)
Shadowmonkey
Oh My God, what happened there talk about a twist? In fact talk about twisted! Very cool read, you took the story to an excellent level and then through in our faces. I love it. More, more.
eternalwytch1
LOL! Thanks!
BlueLotus7
Cool! Very cool! Great ending!
eternalwytch1
Thanks hun! :-)