Alcoholism by AusPoet

Writers • People • posted on Feb 07, 2005

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Description

A shattered turmoil of emotion Love forsaken by deception Caring crushed by indecision Overt destruction, so much broken Hatred spoken Outlook of sad expectation Lost in demobilisation Indecent imposition Sanity is consumed My love for you cannot resume.

Comments (5)

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FireTemptress

9:28PM | Mon, 07 February 2005

Captivating, and heart wrenching....

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cagewench

8:54AM | Tue, 08 February 2005

excellent... I always liked that sort of style, though I don't use it often :) HUG

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TallPockets

11:06AM | Tue, 08 February 2005

Wonderful piece. Loved the format/style. V

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experimental

12:59PM | Tue, 08 February 2005

Hmm, I've been there before. Excellent work. I personally have never liked writing in that style 'cause it never works for me. Apparently it worked great for you.

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