Early morning by kalle3d

Vue • Landscape • posted on Jun 27, 2005

Open full image in new tab Zoom on image

Hover over top left image to zoom.
Click anywhere to exit.

Members remain the original copyright holder in all their materials here at Renderosity. Use of any of their material inconsistent with the terms and conditions set forth is prohibited and is considered an infringement of the copyrights of the respective holders unless specially stated otherwise.

Description

My first Poser 5/Vue 5 (Esprit) work. Nothing spectacular maybe, but I (& my girlfriend too) love ducks, so I wanted to create a scene with them. Mama is diving while her kiddies find out about dragonflies, underwater-phenomenons or just foolin' around. ;o) The scene took 5:44 hours to render (volumetric atmosphere), hope you like it (let me know what you would change or what to improve etc). Dragonflies: DAZ3d Ducks & Ducklings: Vista Internet Products (Lyne Masamitsu), thx!

Comments (6)

)

wabe

8:25AM | Mon, 27 June 2005

Congrats to this start. Looks excellent already. Two things io would change. #1 is the white stone to the left. Change the texture - it takes away attention from the center. #2 what is a little confusing is the close-up nature of the foregrounds - the ducks - but the wide view one has onto the background. How about reducing the background. Bring some grass closer to the ducks and "close" the background with grass. My 2 cents only of course!

)

Syrup

10:41AM | Mon, 27 June 2005

Nicely Done! :B eaver !

)

Djeser

11:20AM | Mon, 27 June 2005

Great job for a first "combo" image! I agree with wabe about the rock, and I'd look at the relative sizes; the background seems too close to be that small...you don't really feel there's any distance between the ducks and the terrain and trees.

)

jmherve

2:30PM | Mon, 27 June 2005

May be the water is too smooth, while ducks are moving. Agree with the lack of scale in perspective. Why this white rock on the left ?!???!! Keep going with the ducks (and your girlfriend too)

)

Lyne

11:47PM | Mon, 27 June 2005

Great first "dive" into both poser and vue! You have done a lot right away with new software! :) I see you used the water with the water plants on it... that is why the water is so smooth.. (and I am not a good one to talk about water, I have yet to really get a hand with vue water!). I get the feeling the camera may have been changed.. the "mm" or focal lenght? That could cause the distortion.. I personally don't change the camera thingy... and have to admit I love seeing my ducklings in any water! ;) Just keep playing with and enjoying the discovery process- you are on your way! :)

)