Sat, Nov 30, 6:48 AM CST

Renderosity Forums / Writers



Welcome to the Writers Forum

Forum Moderators: wheatpenny, Wolfenshire

Writers F.A.Q (Last Updated: 2024 Nov 29 6:28 am)



Writers Gallery

"Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass." ---Anton Chekhov


Subject: April is National Poetry Month


Crescent ( ) posted Tue, 01 April 2003 at 11:16 AM · edited Sat, 30 November 2024 at 6:40 AM

In honor of National Poetry Month, I'd like everyone to post an original poem in this thread and I'll put them in the Library at the end of the month. It can be a new poem, or one that you've posted previously, free form, rhyming, whatever you like. If people are interested, I can also put the poems together as a .pdf anthology with original artwork from the poets. Cheers!


dialyn ( ) posted Tue, 01 April 2003 at 11:21 AM

Wow, Crescent, that's a really nice. We have so many poets on this forum, there's a potential of having something really nice come out of this. Great idea! :)


jagill ( ) posted Tue, 01 April 2003 at 1:56 PM

Still working on an image to go with this one. Orions Gate Jet trails span Orion toward a cratered moon. The remnants of silvered charms faded in the solar wind. To leap the stars in search of hidden treasures. And to save worlds from peril. Far from the shrinking world below and someone they forgot searching between the stars.


tjames ( ) posted Tue, 01 April 2003 at 2:46 PM

It seems like I've been stuck in war thinking over at 2d. I'd like to get off that kick. Perhaps while I'm looking over the March Poetry Challenge poems something new will come to mind.


jagill ( ) posted Tue, 01 April 2003 at 3:23 PM

I had to force myself to get out of my rut. This is a nice diversion.


lavender ( ) posted Tue, 01 April 2003 at 6:05 PM

A thousand worlds of wonder, are dancing through my mind A thousand worlds incorpreal, that only I can find No eyes can see their beauties and no ears can hear their call... Have I birthed a thousand worlds, only to doom them all? Worlds of barren iceflows, alight with frozen fire Dim green light beneath the trees, or burning like a pyre Dark blue depths of muffled sounds, where mighty sea beasts wend... If I can't keep them turning, a thousand worlds will end. Human worlds, or lifeless, or worlds with alien kind: Heroes, fools and villians, and lovers gaily blind. Two hands, four hands, suckers, those who whistle, shriek or purr... And if I can't portray them, it's as if they never were. Their empires and their townships their struggles and success The generals who battle, and the leaders who impress The seeds of change they planted and the harvest of the crop... And if I cannot find the workds, a thousand stories stop. I spend my days in striving, to bring them to the light Only to find their numbers have expanded overnight No matter how I labour and no matter how I strive, Only the merest fragments ever can be made alive... But a thousand worlds of wonder, are trapped inside my head A thousand worlds all fated to die when I am dead And so I keep on hoping I can pass some on to you... By sharing them with others, I can maybe save a few. This is the most depressing thing I've ever written, so maybe it isn't the best thing to drop in with, but the topic seems so wonderfully apropo. :)


yomah ( ) posted Wed, 02 April 2003 at 7:51 PM

Are there guidelines or rules to post? I ask because much on my work is threaded together with the image I have created. I do not know if one can live without the other.

Another member, tjames, said in his comment to my work that I should come visit.

Please let me know if I can include my art, though it would seem out of place here.

Thank you,
Yoshi


dialyn ( ) posted Wed, 02 April 2003 at 8:27 PM

You may definitely include your art. We have several artist/poets/writers (singly and in pairs). Your combined art and writing are most welcome. Crescent will no doubt provide more detail, but, in general, the main rule is DON'T APOLOGIZE FOR POSTING. :)


Crescent ( ) posted Wed, 02 April 2003 at 9:30 PM

DON'T APOLOGIZE FOR POSTING. Yeah, what dialyn said. Trust me, she's the expert on it. ;-}~ If the story and image are intertwined, please feel free to post both. I ask that the image size be kept reasonable (I don't have a set number - just think dial-up) and obviously that images and stories stay within TOS but otherwise have fun. Welcome to the Forum! Cres


Shoshanna ( ) posted Wed, 02 April 2003 at 11:43 PM

I'm wondering if we should have a new sign up there in the banner....don't apologize for posting. Also wondering how many other forums here have this problem. Shanna :-)



Luiseach ( ) posted Thu, 03 April 2003 at 4:12 PM

:::biting my nails to keep from apologising for apologising last week::: ;)


yomah ( ) posted Thu, 03 April 2003 at 7:18 PM

Content Advisory! This message contains nudity

Here is something. I don't know to call it a poem because it is intertwined with the picture but here is the link to it.

Your Touch

I know you say to not apoligize but it may appear as nudity in the image. I do not wish to offend anyone but I would like your opinion and critique please.

Yoshi


Shoshanna ( ) posted Thu, 03 April 2003 at 7:28 PM

Hi Yomah I'd change the first line if I were you. Either A cold hand splinters... or Cold hands splinter... And I'd try and replace the "beast with two backs" bit as well, although I can't think of anything off the top of my head. Apart from that, I liked it Shanna :-) just my personal opinion.



jstro ( ) posted Tue, 29 April 2003 at 7:45 PM

Almost Home J. M. Strother I know these hills, these valleys, Those old familiar trees. I know the house in yonder field, The smell upon the breeze. I know these roads I walk down now, The byways of my youth, My spirits rise as I approach That old familiar roof. And as I tread upon these feet, Which have seen many a weary mile, I see an old and familiar face That greets me with a smile. As I round the final curve in This path that I now roam, My heart swells in knowledge that I am almost home.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


jstro ( ) posted Tue, 29 April 2003 at 7:46 PM

Farewell Columbia J. M. Strother Again the news rips at my heart Seven lives, in but a moment, gone. Seven hopes and seven dreams; Fathers, brothers, sisters, mothers. What cruel fate takes away these brave, The pioneers so shortly on our shores? Their lives so blessed, yet so quickly taken away, To leave a hole in our very souls. Crush not our dreams, oh cruel fate. Crush not our hopes, for we refuse to yield. Farewell Columbia, bright spirit in the sky. In memoriam: STS-107, January 16-February 1, 2003 Commander Rick D. Husband, Pilot William C. McCool, Payload Specialist Michael P. Anderson, Mission Specialist Kalpana Chawla, Mission Specialist David M. Brown, Mission Specialist Laurel B. Clark, Payload Specialist Ilan Ramon.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


jstro ( ) posted Tue, 29 April 2003 at 7:49 PM

Road Cloud J. M. Strother The morning begins in a slow drizzle. The car is packed. On the road before a muted dawn. The girls in back, awake, then dozing bored. Vacation road trip. Many weary miles to go. The asphalt ribbon wends up and down, This way and that. Mountain road, seldom traveled. My wife points ahead; the mountain hides. Watch for Fog on Road. She looks to me with worried eye. No real choice, we carry on, slower now. Road climbs into the mists. Hey girls, I say over my shoulder, We're in a cloud. Sitting up, they look around. We're in a cloud? Then, amazed, We're in a cloud!

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


tjames ( ) posted Sun, 04 May 2003 at 2:08 AM

Sorry I haven't written..If you look at my gallery you'ld find I've been doing some cleaning also. I guess every artist goes through a stage where nothing is good enough and items thought good before are seen in a more critical light. May challenge is up. I'll see if I can think up another while I'm at it.


Shoshanna ( ) posted Thu, 08 May 2003 at 6:57 PM

Well, it won't be the best poem in there, but I'd like to submit this one. I hope someone likes it :-) Shouting Into The Dark. by Shoshanna. When I am gone, What will live on of me? Will someone think to tell Rend'rosity? Perhaps this page will still be here when I Have passed to other worlds? I'll learn to fly Among the stars, a virtual being near And hope to move the casual reader here. The thought that I may touch you once, when I am gone Lends me the strength each troubled night to carry on. Do we post here, to shout against the dark? Encode a page upon this web to leave a human mark? Are these advances in our desktop schemes Used to reach out in search of human dreams? I may be lost already to the world And stumbled unaware upon my words you read unknowing Perhaps one day my son will find this part of me unfurled? When he is done with teenaged trials and growing I feel myself decaying as I speak And type against the fear that makes me weak. Will I have time? Is it too late already? Will I grow blind, before my visions steady? Can I translate the wonders I have seen So you can see and say you know exactly what I mean? Or is this all a simple "look at me!" I'm special nowhere else, but here, maybe? Could I but live in real life as honestly as I live here Would I have lived a life Less full of fear?



Shoshanna ( ) posted Thu, 08 May 2003 at 10:12 PM

and on a lighter note: Kihon, Kata, Kumite by Shoshanna. Kihon, Kata, Kumite. Will I gain my belt today? Hair brushed, hairband matching belt Sensei enters, my mind melts Oh help! He's gorgeous, that's not right. Last belt the sensei was a fright I'll never pass now, that's for sure I swear I smell Chanels' Allure. Kihon, Kata, Kumite My chance has come and gone today The test is over, now to see If there's a new red belt for me? I don't know should I laugh or cry I got my belt, but I want to die. One hundred people heard him tell me "Do more sit ups...you got a big belly!"



Privacy Notice

This site uses cookies to deliver the best experience. Our own cookies make user accounts and other features possible. Third-party cookies are used to display relevant ads and to analyze how Renderosity is used. By using our site, you acknowledge that you have read and understood our Terms of Service, including our Cookie Policy and our Privacy Policy.