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Photography F.A.Q (Last Updated: 2024 Dec 31 10:42 am)
Levels seem to be a little off on all 3(at least on my screen) making them a little flat. I'd probably adjust both black and white, but I think the worst off might actually be the white point (that's just from looking). I like the 3rd one. The lines are very good...very feminine. The 2nd one doesn't seem to flow as well, shape-wise. I think the top one would be really interesting if she didn't have the tee shirt on. -=>Donald
Nice job, MM. [Is there any more real estate available on your street?] You also did a very nice job painting on those jeans in #2. I do like the B&W. It may be instructive for all of us to see the color also. Since you are making prints, (inkjet?), the important thing will be how these come out. May need different adjustments for the screen vs. paper.
I don't know what she was looking for. The second one to me is fine. Since this was shot in B/W AND she wanted prints I am assuming you used film. If so...and I have no idea how good you are. You might want to increase the contrast a bit more. If this is digital. Well you can doo all sorts of things! Since the second photo was my favorite. ( Personally I like underwear adds. ) I think you could clone out the white pocket of the pants to make things look more interesting and/or les distracting. I probably would clone out the pattern on the undies too. But that is me regarding the pattern. The first I think I would crop a bit more off. The thired I think you cropped too much. BUT you know me and cropping. I don't like to eliminate body parts! But the second one really is cool. Bsteph
#3 is the best imho..... then 2 & 1 in that order.
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ok ya the pocket is distracting and the third should have bee cropped a bit lower. and, i think it would be a cool twist to copy the belly button off of 2 and paste it between the shirt and pants of 1, just for a strange twist... maybe i'm messed up but that would really trick the eyes... heh ARTskyd
Sorry folks I removed the images that were altered as this was a serious request for feedback. There's always a time for fun, just not in this thread. :~)
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