Ooo, interesting style, I like it. Not sure exactly what this image needs just now, I think the composition is off and I think it could use a few more different objects but honestly I am not sure how the composition should be changed or what needs to be added. Stick with it though, from the looks of this I think the final image is very promising...

Okay don't shoot me here, but could the problem be Meski's windmill? You've got that very strong non-cubist thing going on and the sillouette seems to integrate well but then - boing - I stop dead on the incongruious windmill. You might consider using primitives to knock one up to carry on the sytle statement.

PS - I tawt I taw a tweety burd in da clouds... :P

i agree with ddruckenmiller... try to make a windmill by your own and the image will be AMAZING. i like the style very much

It's an intersting style. Yeah, the windmill doesn't quite work. The jouster is jousting towards it? I like ddruckenmillers comments. It is a sillouette. Almost like the old Japanese puppet shows. Maybe play up on that.

I like the cartoonish style but you are mixing different styles. I agree with the others. Try using a light dome and it will look much softer.

This is Don Quixote(SP?)yes?

Nice,.........reminds me of the 20th century American painter Grant Woods.

i think the windmill is ok as thats the reason why hes charging it. just move the tree to the left a bit now it looks as if hes charging that instead of the windmill. great style

Bryster: yes it's Don Quixotte.

The shawods on the mill look very different from the rest. The shadows on the mill are dark and sharp. The shadows on the trees are soft and not so dark. One thing that also doens't look right is that the rider is an silhouette but the tree and ground next to him isn't. This makes the rider look like a black 2D object in a 3D world.

This one works better - I'm with Anders on the shadows though... are you trying to work the concept that the w-mill is reality and the rest of his world is illusory?

One thing that looks wrong to me (it's probably just me, but..), is the way the lance is (or appears to be) being held. Jousting lances are usually held somewhere near the middle (for balance) so there should be nearly as much sticking out behind as in front. The lance is held between the arm and the body, with the upper arm also gripping the arm. Just my 2p worth:-) I like the style! Cheers, Diolma

oops: errm - "...upper arm also gripping the lance"..