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Bryce F.A.Q (Last Updated: 2025 Feb 02 3:02 am)
I gotta get my mits on this....!!! AwesomE!
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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster
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thank you for your enthusiasm...but... guys... the more I stare her the more I'm not satisfied.. I think that I've focused too much on biomechanics during the evolution of the project. There is some on the aesthetical side that is not convincing... what is according to you? (I cant find it, since a father can't find difects in his daughter) any suggestion?
marvellous engineering, but can she cook?
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purely constructive critisism here... overall i would scale her on the y slightly to give her more height. she looks a little stocky as is. i think maybe she looks too 'hip'ee' too ... like her hips are bigger than her chest (which i also think could use a slight scaling on the x) i would also, scale the upper-leg plate on the y and bring it more towards the knee joint. also, consider moving the knee pad. either higher to make it more a part of the thigh or lower and make it part of the shin. the point being, it continues the line between the upper and lower leg wehn you should break it so the viewers eye can deliniate the individualality of both peices. i think she needs a back/shoulder blade plates. her posture is pretty bad. most people, even with bad posture, when they stand straight, their trunk tends to lean backwards. (shoulders, colar bone) but this could be tough since it would require moving and scaling lots of parts (by the look of it). i know its alot but i really had to nit-pick to get this so its either good or bad critisism but purely constructive in its intent.
I wouldn't worry too much about the aesthetic...I'm sure we'll all change her .mats when we get hold of her and caress and polish and rub and shine and add pretty textures and makeup and dress her in pretty clothes and chat her up and take her out dancing and to dinner and the movies and get her phone number and .........
Available on Amazon for the Kindle E-Reader
All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster
And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...
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