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Subject: After some feedback
Very nice! I like it just the way it is.
"It is good to see ourselves as
others see us. Try as we may, we are never
able to know ourselves fully as we
are, especially the evil side of us.
This we can do only if we are not
angry with our critics but will take in good
heart whatever they might have to
say." - Ghandi
Bless ya Acadia, you are such a sweety
Fugazi (without the aid of a safety net)
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I still use your "Spider Goth Dress." It's great!
"It is good to see ourselves as
others see us. Try as we may, we are never
able to know ourselves fully as we
are, especially the evil side of us.
This we can do only if we are not
angry with our critics but will take in good
heart whatever they might have to
say." - Ghandi
:) glad you got some use out of it Acadia :)
Not even a belt or some shoulder thingies geepmeister?
Fugazi (without the aid of a safety net)
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I think it's perfect the way it is. Anything more would make it look "cluttered" and often times less is definitely more.
"It is good to see ourselves as
others see us. Try as we may, we are never
able to know ourselves fully as we
are, especially the evil side of us.
This we can do only if we are not
angry with our critics but will take in good
heart whatever they might have to
say." - Ghandi
Um, er, well, mehbee a belt ... it was gettin' kinda thirsty in here anywho ... ;=]
Oh, you meant a sort of waist type thingie, nay? - Well, let's see what ya got. I'll stay tuned ...
Now, I'll just get back to MY belt. :biggrin:
cheers,
dr geep
;=]
Remember ... "With Poser, all things are possible, and poseable!"
cheers,
dr geep ... :o]
edited 10/5/2019
That looks great, Fugazi.. a really nice, sexy dress.
It's difficult to tell from this angle, but the neckline looks a little peculiar to me. I would either lower the front of the neckline slightly, or, probably better for this style, make the sides a bit higher. But it might look different from another angle.
The overlap down the front looks a bit flat in this picture - could you put bump/displacement there to give the effect of a real overlap?
Hope this helps!
Izi
"If I were a shadow, I know I wouldn't like to be half of
what I should be."
Mr Otsuka, the old black tomcat in Kafka on the Shore (Haruki
Murakami)
Maybe the sleeves should be a little bit longer, so that the cuffs reach her wrists.
The pen is mightier than the sword. But if you literally want to have some impact, use a typewriter
Maybe the trim that follows the buttons up the front also going around the neck or at least add the material zone so it can be textured in bu us users. You have trim on the front and the cuffs. That is the only thing I would consider. Looks fantastic.
Gary
"Those who lose themselves in a passion lose less than those who lose their passion"
Looking closer, it looks like the brown trim does go around the neck. cspear echoed my initial thought on the neckline.
I've never tried dynamic clothing because I always thought it was for loose-fitting clothes. But this is snug and sexy... I love it!
Did fugazi fall off his high-wire? I heard no scream or thump.
"If I were a shadow, I know I wouldn't like to be half of
what I should be."
Mr Otsuka, the old black tomcat in Kafka on the Shore (Haruki
Murakami)
It's ok I havnt fallen off anything, just interupted by sleep and work :) Thanks everyone for the feedback and kind words.
I will have a look at the neck, though it does look a bit betterfrom above :) honest, the trim goes right around her neck. I think she needs a badge though now :) maybe something Judge Dreddy to set it off just a lil, I will put some thoughts into that.
Sorry no cleavage :) sometimes sexy is just sexy ;p you dont have to beat someone over the head with it (no snickering in the back). As for the sword well, a scabbard probably. And not enough leg? how much leg do ya want to see, any less dress and it would be just rude :p
John :)
Fugazi (without the aid of a safety net)
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I like this dress, it looks very early 60's. I don't think the sleeves have to be longer, those dresses had also a "midi" sleeve. I think a kind of tweed pattern would also look nice on it, and one of those round little hats!
Great work.
Bopper.
-How can you improve things when you don't make mistakes?
John.
Fugazi (without the aid of a safety net)
https://www.facebook.com/Fugazi3D
I'm glad you didn't adjust the sleeves or add a "badge" :)
TBH I liked the first one better :) Maybe because the dress popped with the black material and bronze buttons and trim. I didn't think the first one looked like plastic at all. In fact I immediately took it to be a smooth leather material.
If you are insistent on fixing the neckline, then I would add to it instead of taking away. Turn it into a bit of a turtle-neck but only go about 1/4 to 1/2 way up the neck instead of to the chin like most turtle-necks do. And take the closure to the top of the neckline like you have now.
"It is good to see ourselves as
others see us. Try as we may, we are never
able to know ourselves fully as we
are, especially the evil side of us.
This we can do only if we are not
angry with our critics but will take in good
heart whatever they might have to
say." - Ghandi
I think I like the original too :) don't hurt to try stuff though ;)
Fugazi (without the aid of a safety net)
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I agree 100% with Acadia's comments - I particularly liked the sheeny leather look of the original. A slightly higher, tighter neckline would go well with the snug fit of the rest of the dress.
"If I were a shadow, I know I wouldn't like to be half of
what I should be."
Mr Otsuka, the old black tomcat in Kafka on the Shore (Haruki
Murakami)
"I want it, I want it, I want it!" The Who, Magic Bus (circa 1970'ish)
Please don't do a Daz on us and say "Soon!"
Where others might be into fantasy. I like clothes people would actually wear in real life.
Looking good, real good!
Gary
"Those who lose themselves in a passion lose less than those who lose their passion"
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Just after some feedback really. I have nade this dress, it's dynamic with real buttons (which I'm pleased with). But what would make it better?rendered in vue6i
Thanks :)
John
Fugazi (without the aid of a safety net)
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