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Subject: fairy with bryce

solrac47 opened this issue on Apr 17, 2011 · 7 posts
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solrac47 ( ) posted Sun, 17 April 2011 at 2:04 PM · edited Fri, 15 November 2024 at 5:21 PM

Attached Link: http://personales.ya.com/cafupe/

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Hello I made this picture and would like your opinion because I always lose with the perspectives and paying close distance where I could use less. I hope your critical for making further progress

bobbystahr ( ) posted Sun, 17 April 2011 at 11:24 PM

It's really hard to give a critique other than a larger render would be nice. These old eyes, even with glasses on have a hard time with small stuff. Your best bet to get critiques is to do an 800x600 at least render and upload it to your gallery and post the link here in the forum. That's generally a good way to do it unless you don't want the image in your gallery, then a larger image than you posted here can be uploaded to the forum as well.

 

Once in a while I look around,
I see a sound
and try to write it down
Sometimes they come out very soft
Tinkling light sound
The Sun comes up again



 

 

 

 

 

solrac47 ( ) posted Mon, 18 April 2011 at 2:19 AM

Here is the link to the image in the gallery to view larger

http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/index.php?image_id=2192469

TheBryster ( ) posted Mon, 18 April 2011 at 5:00 AM
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You know? I can't really fault this, but perhaps changing the POV to brig the fairy into the centre of the piece and changing the ground texture to something green and grassy might improve it.

Hope this helps.

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bobbystahr ( ) posted Mon, 18 April 2011 at 8:39 AM

I agree..a quite nice image, just a bit more tweaking and it should be done.. ...

 

Once in a while I look around,
I see a sound
and try to write it down
Sometimes they come out very soft
Tinkling light sound
The Sun comes up again



 

 

 

 

 

skiwillgee ( ) posted Tue, 19 April 2011 at 11:47 AM

Agree with ground textures and one would expect more shadows cast by the trees therefore making the forest ground darker. This is a very good piece to tweak to perfection. Keep striving always.

solrac47 ( ) posted Wed, 20 April 2011 at 2:17 AM

thanks to all for your comments, the land if you need another texture will try to correct

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