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Bryce F.A.Q (Last Updated: 2024 Nov 26 4:28 pm)
HTH
big_hoovie
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Just a side note: you image seems to be a bit light to the right side. this could be, perhaps, do to the lack of objects after the tree to the right. Just because this is the edge of the picture, does not mean you have to stop placing objects.If you click the link above, you can find my entry to the June challenge. the idea was to create a realisitic looking desk, which I like to think I accomplished. There are several things that you cannot see in the picture(such as more CD cases, some robot like figures, a ceiling, complete with bump map, two more walls, and a floor) but I added them for the light quality.
HTH
big_hoovie
Thanks big_hoovie,
Will have to try this right away. I made the bench myself and would like to use it in the future but I want to have a good material attached to it. I see what you mean about the righthand side. It needs a branch or shadow or something coming in off the right side. LOL, I'm looking at my desk and thinking how nice it would be if it were as clean as the one you created. Brief description of mine - 3 beer bottles, 1 bowl, a back scratcher, tons of papers, lots of pens, and much more.
:)
I like your lighting here. Seems like there should be something more on the left side, though. A boulder perhaps, or a bush, or you could rotate the camera so the bench is more to the left of the scene. and maybe there should be some rocks and tufts of grass/weeds scattered around in the background? Just suggestions, though. I like this image. Also, just as a general suggestion, not necessarily related to this particular image, try changing around the view so the horizon isn't always right in the center. It can make for a much more dynamic image. By the way, Bryce 4 does have rocks.
I would say if you are planning on keeping the tree with the bucket, I would either make a rock-covered path that goes by the benches, or a paved/cement walkway that goes by the benches. If you decide to get rid of the bucket, then you may not need a bucket, but keep in mind, that without a walkway of any sort, I get the feeling of surrealism, as you don't normally expect to see a bench without a path. BTW, you pic has improved quite a bit since the first one. big_hoovie
My suggestions: make the benches smaller, about a half of the present size. Or make the lamps much bigger. this way they are out of proportion. I also think you'd be better off putting all trees in buckets with that kind of ground. Finally, yes, what hoovie said about a walk-way. Just flatten the rocks in Y dimension (to about height of 2) and arange them. They don't have to be flush with each other.
-- erlik
whew, lots more work :-). I was thinking about making the lamp posts into those straight type which are generally shorter because I think I sensed the same thing, that they were too short. And my original with its sharp rocks was an attempt at a cobblestone type path. I don't agree about putting all the trees in buckets, the others are supposed to be native to the landscape. Well, this has been very, very helpful. I love how much the scene has changed since talking to you guys and how much more can be done to it. I have to put it on the back burner for a bit. But I definately want to make more changes to it before posting it in my gallery. I'll put a link in here when I get that done in case anyone's curious about the what the end result will end up looking like. And if there's anymore ideas for improvement on this, I'd love to hear them, thanks again everyone! Ang
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