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Subject: Summer Haiku?

hanevi opened this issue on May 16, 2006 · 210 posts
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TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2006 at 3:11 PM

Heheh, and a new type of haiku as well, 3-5-5. ;^P

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2006 at 3:19 PM

Oooops.How embarrassing! Not only am I in this weird silly mood, I can't even count,lol. Too bad there's no full moon to blame! ;^)

Blockbuster you lie!
Monthly costs me a bundle
"No late fees"  my eye!

Is that better?Btw,I'm still not seriously adding this one,lol.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2006 at 3:21 PM

Yeah, that was a day or two ago -- maybe you are still feeling the lingering effects. ;] Okay, back OT...

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2006 at 3:46 PM

Like some weird Lunar hangover? LOL!

Okay...

Blockbuster movies
Mega effects, mega stars
Mega ticket lines.

Sorry,not so good... :^/

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2006 at 3:52 PM

Lines sculpt - sun and wind. Desert is a harsh mistress. Lone vulture circles. ______ How's that for cheerful? LoL, I like it Marlene!

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2006 at 4:06 PM

Circles of yellow
Cheery floral faces smile
On sunflower fields.

Yours is wonderful...even if a bit bleak,lol....So I thought I'd 'brighten' things up up a bit. ;^)

Too bad I don't have a photo... : /

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2006 at 4:22 PM

Attached Link: sunflowers

8^)

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2006 at 4:26 PM

Thanks.It was that fourth one I was thinking of. :thumbupboth:

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

hanevi ( ) posted Fri, 14 July 2006 at 4:11 AM

fields of Haiku ripe,
come one, come all, harvest calls,
syllabic reaping

You guys are terrible...now I've caught the bug. I think the summer theme's mortally shot now.

TwoP and Marlene, you guys are funny and funny. I actually laughed reading the previous page. And the sunflower link is almost unbelievable.

Also I want to extend a big thank you to everyone who participated in this thread till now, and everyone who's viewed it. We crossed the thousand viewings mark. It's been a fantastic thread, and very enjoyable writing in it, and reading some excellent Haiku!

Just a question- how do you guys feel now about a change of theme, or shall we press in to the summer theme till summer's well and truly gone?

TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 14 July 2006 at 2:20 PM

Attached Link: Summer

Perhaps it is time to move on to something new, though I have enjoyed the Summer theme quite a bit. So don't go by me, I'm easy to please. Reaping what you sow. Gosh, how clichcan you get? The heat has me fried. ;^]

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

jstro ( ) posted Fri, 14 July 2006 at 2:32 PM

Fried eggs. Splat.
Contest on sidewalk.
No winners.

These things tend to run their natural course. When folks quit posting they drift off into fond memories. I don't think you need to worry about it either way.

~jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Margana ( ) posted Fri, 14 July 2006 at 3:00 PM

Winners sieze the day
Losers let it pass away
Savor the moment.

Thanks for the link,Kortalouche.Glad we made ya chuckle,Hanevi.

I'm open to whatever you guys want.Just know I'm in,regardless...I enjoy this a great deal.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

hanevi ( ) posted Mon, 17 July 2006 at 2:42 AM

moment by moment,
syllables I catch, forming,
Haiku junkie here...

My God, I'm caught! I can't get the counting out of my head... I feel a silly wave coming, shall we surf it, friends?? :D

Margana ( ) posted Mon, 17 July 2006 at 11:44 AM

Here upon your shore
Battered by the surging sea
My heart waits for you.

LOL I'm obviously in a different mood...but by all means,go ahead and be silly!  :^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TallPockets ( ) posted Mon, 17 July 2006 at 8:08 PM

NOTE: THIS HAIKU RATED 'PG-13'

DUMB, old TallPockets!
Basked in the sun, buck nekkid
Like squirrels sun 'nuts'

WINK

TallPockets ( ) posted Mon, 17 July 2006 at 9:42 PM

Sorry, brain cramp ....

Try this again .....

NOTE: THIS HAIKU RATED 'PG-13'

You! DUMB TallPockets!
Basked in the sun, buck nekkid
Like squirrels, sun 'nuts'

WINK

Margana ( ) posted Mon, 17 July 2006 at 9:45 PM

LOL at TP/Brian...

I see someone else is in a silly mood,as well!  ;^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TallPockets ( ) posted Mon, 17 July 2006 at 9:45 PM

Posted Mon, Jul 17, 2006 8:08 pm

Note to Admins:

Since it appears one can only 'edit' or delete a post for '15' minutes(?), would someone with the authority to do so, kindly delete my FIRST feeble attempt above mentioned.

Thanks much, TallPockets

(What is the reasoning behind only being able to 'edit' for '15'  minutes if I may ask)?

TallPockets ( ) posted Mon, 17 July 2006 at 9:47 PM

Maragana: Yep, SILLY is my middle name.

I can't tell ya' all the names I've also been called in my lifetime. WINK.

My best to you and yours, dear soul. T.P.

Margana ( ) posted Mon, 17 July 2006 at 10:04 PM · edited Mon, 17 July 2006 at 10:09 PM

Nuts and summer fruit
Sweet supper on sultry nights
Heat and wine and you.

...And we see my mood still hasn't changed ...even with all the silliness,lol.

Edit:  I see you replied while i was writing,T.P. Never mind the first haiku..we have all made mistakes here,and no one takes it seriously.One of my recent posts wasn't even 3-5-3!

I'm just happy to see you participating.I hope you will continue to do so.All my best to you,as well...T( silly) P... ;^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

hanevi ( ) posted Tue, 18 July 2006 at 6:22 AM

you and I
forever dancing
in Life's Hall

Marlene, now I can't get a single silly one after a day's thinking. Anyway, thought I'd try a more romantic one (strange feel to it after much writing that's been usually very serious and intense). Been thinking of my wife and little daughter; thought I'd write one for my wife. :)

TP, you've got me laughing! :D  I didn't know you could edit only for 15 mins; I'm imagining the scene and laughing again. Good to see you again in the thread.

Margana ( ) posted Wed, 19 July 2006 at 2:10 AM

Hall of sweet mem'ries
I walk in silent review
Life is beautiful.

Sorry you lost your 'silly' edge,Hanevi...but I am sure your wife will love it.   :^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

hanevi ( ) posted Wed, 19 July 2006 at 3:13 AM

beautiful,
pecking at puddles,
rain-song, sweet

Although the Monsoon is hard on us here, it's also very beautiful. I was watching the drops fall on little pools of water. How welcome after the scorching heat! Your Haiku is lovely, with a gentle lilt. I love these ones that you write.

I'm sure the silly edge will return at an unexpected time, Marlene. 'I'll be back...' Ha!

Drekinn ( ) posted Wed, 19 July 2006 at 6:42 AM · edited Wed, 19 July 2006 at 6:43 AM

Sweet upon my tongue:
Neopolitan ice-cream;
Chocolate first to go.

--

Hey Marlene, just thought I'd jog your memory of a certain alliteration challenge thread that's been rather neglected of late. It's been almost three weeks since I last thrust down the gauntlet. :crying:
Hope you can post soon, as I'm almost tempted to begin answering my own challenges!

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 

Margana ( ) posted Wed, 19 July 2006 at 12:57 PM · edited Wed, 19 July 2006 at 12:58 PM

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Go amongst the reeds Tawny survivors clinging To parched,windswept sand.

Not my finest hour,but I do have a photograph,at least,lol.It looks much better if you click on it....

Thank you,Hanevi,for your kind words.I very much like yours,as well.The words flow beautifully.

LOL @ Drekinn and his 'wobbling' lip...Aw...Has it been three weeks already?Sigh,time sure flies.
I will post as soon as I can.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

hanevi ( ) posted Thu, 20 July 2006 at 3:09 AM

sand, ochre stretches,
I call, words have no echo,
wilderness listens

Oh, that's lovely Marlene. There are such deep undertones, and profound parables hidden.

Hi Drekinn! I feel so guilty about the alliteration thread which I enjoyed reading so much, but can't get time to write. Tsk! what do I do with myself?

WeeLaddie ( ) posted Sat, 22 July 2006 at 5:59 AM

I've just caught sight of this summer haiku train, and thought I'd jump on for the ride.

Listens, ears burning

Hearing jingling ice cream vans

** Rumours on slaked tongues**

TallPockets ( ) posted Mon, 24 July 2006 at 12:24 AM

Tongues, speaking un-truths
Spouses cheat, hot summer nights
Sweating, not from 'Sun'

Margana ( ) posted Mon, 24 July 2006 at 12:37 AM

Sun beats intensely
Pounding on winter-worn flesh
Passion awakens.

Welcome,WeeLaddie....Love your haiku...

And TP/Brian  great to see you here too!

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

WeeLaddie ( ) posted Mon, 24 July 2006 at 2:18 PM

Awakens, eh . . . . . . that's a toughy. But here goes.

Awakens cherubs

Slumbering on sun-baked breasts

Bows primed with hormones

Margana ( ) posted Mon, 24 July 2006 at 3:39 PM

Hormones make me nuts
Is it this wicked heatwave
Or my hot flashes?

LOL. ;^P

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

Drekinn ( ) posted Mon, 24 July 2006 at 6:34 PM

Flashes in the pan;
Likened to summer's fury;
Flames sizzle and burn.

--

Welcome WeeLaddie. It's great to see a fresh new ingredient thrown into the mix.

Marlene: !

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 

WeeLaddie ( ) posted Tue, 25 July 2006 at 4:42 AM

Nice one Drekinn, conjures up scenes of summer forest fires. I'll post my "Flashes" haiku now. though I know it's redundant in the last/first word sequence. It was penned and has to be aired, or so my ego's telling me.

Flashes of sunlight

Venetian blinded smoochers

Under the boardwalk 

 

Remember, first word in sequential train  is "Burn".

 

WeeLaddie ( ) posted Thu, 27 July 2006 at 3:37 AM

Burn down false bridges

Leading to pie in the sky

Scorching sun purges

Margana ( ) posted Fri, 28 July 2006 at 2:25 AM

Purges, Valpurgis
Summer night at the op'rah
I shouldn't have drank.

I'm sorry.I couldn't think of anything else  for 'purges'...LOL.  ;^/

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

WeeLaddie ( ) posted Mon, 31 July 2006 at 1:52 PM

Drank her Chinese leaves

On an English summer lawn

A nice cup of tea.

Margana ( ) posted Mon, 31 July 2006 at 2:43 PM

Tea in a tall glass
Clicking,dripping down the sides
Icy cold relief.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

Drekinn ( ) posted Wed, 02 August 2006 at 3:14 AM

Relief in darkness;
If only for a moment:
The sun cloaked by cloud.

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 

WeeLaddie ( ) posted Thu, 03 August 2006 at 5:05 AM

Cloud, so high and dry

Stranger in a sun-baked sky

Sign of wetter days?

 

John

TallPockets ( ) posted Sun, 06 August 2006 at 2:47 AM

Days after days, HOT
All the writers stay in shade
I await winter

hanevi ( ) posted Sun, 06 August 2006 at 11:08 AM

Wow, guys!

Here I am off on another teaching assignment, and here it's cold and raining and raining, and floods everywhere. Crazy land I live in. I haven't had a chance to write anything in the last few days, but it's nice to see so many excellent Haiku. :)

winter fog,

monsoon cloud and rain,

seasons meet

Not so good, but I'm rushing and wanted to stay connected.

Margana ( ) posted Sun, 06 August 2006 at 1:40 PM · edited Sun, 06 August 2006 at 1:41 PM

Meet the break of day
With opened eyes and witness
Possibility.

An almost impossible  three word gauntlet....LOL.

PS-Not my best either,but wanted to 'stay tuned' as well.

Lovely haiku everyone.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

Drekinn ( ) posted Wed, 09 August 2006 at 3:29 AM

Possibility:
Chance of a fleeting snow storm;
Not a hope in hell.

--

Ah, hell and summer: a partnership forged of pain and suffering.

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 

TallPockets ( ) posted Sun, 13 August 2006 at 12:41 AM

Hell hath no fury
Like a woman who is scorned
Why'd I marry HER?

WINK/Smile

Margana ( ) posted Sun, 13 August 2006 at 1:34 AM

Her smile lit the day
She brought summer with her and
Winter in her wake.

Not too great but hey,it's really late here!  ;^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TallPockets ( ) posted Sun, 13 August 2006 at 1:55 AM

Wake up, smell coffee
Summer sun slowly rises
Bacon smells abound

Margana ( ) posted Sun, 13 August 2006 at 2:04 AM

Mmmmm.Now I'm hungry.I better get to bed,lol.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

Drekinn ( ) posted Sun, 13 August 2006 at 2:15 AM · edited Sun, 13 August 2006 at 2:16 AM

Abound, buzz the flies;
Swatting hands, seething tempers;
Spray-can poised to strike.

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 

Margana ( ) posted Mon, 14 August 2006 at 2:23 AM

Strike the matches,light
The flickering embers of
The last of summer.

That's not really a haiku...my apologies... :^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TallPockets ( ) posted Mon, 14 August 2006 at 10:29 AM

Summer, speedos, beach
Overweight, balding, large man
Not a pretty sight!

WINK.

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